Sacrifice (Quetzalcoatl)

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Rain poured across the stone steps of your temple, the rain harsh enough to bounce across the stone and plentiful enough to soak into every single crack that had formed within its stone visage although it was not enough to wash the blood of sacrifice off itself. You had lost count of just how many men, women and children had dragged up those stairs, placed onto the stone table resting at the top before having their hearts carved  out of their body and collected by the Gods, who granted Tenochtitlan with the bounties needed to keep surviving. You had watched several of these sacrifices, watching as the life extinguished from the eyes of those laying upon the table, the blood pooling up is their chest as their heart was held aloft, shining in the light of the fire around you. However, every time that you had gone up those steps you never thought that it could be your children who would be laying on that table,at least not until today where you had been told that their hearts would be given to the goddess Quetzalcoatl in order to to bless the crops of your vast jungle city.

You had adamantly refused to do such a thing of which was ignored by your priests, telling you that the only sacrifice Quetzalcoatl was willing to make was one of young blood and your children had fit the bill perfectly. As they left you to stew in your own rage, they would tell you that perhaps if you could get the goddess herself to personally come down from above and tell you that she would be willing to accept another method of sacrifice, they would not kill your children. As they walked down the muddy pathway leading to your home, seemingly discussing the upcoming sacrifice to themselves,you wondered if you could stand before your god, offer your own beating heart in exchange for your children's lives and have the goddess accept your plea to her.

Now you were standing in front of the stone stairs leading up to the altar, the moon being covered by a thick veil of cloud, only the smallest rays of moonlight shining down upon the wet and glossy stone as if to highlight the path that you must walk upon. The rain was as thick as it was heavy, hitting your skin as if it was made of obsidian, the occasional burst of lightning falling out of the clouds and through the air before hitting the ground around you, the sky rumbling after each strike as if to scream at you about its presence above you. You would close your eyes and take a breath before you moved forward, feeling the cold of the first step against your foot, the water parting its way around you as you began to walk up the stairs, knowing your death may well lay at the top of it.

As you began your climb up the temple you’d feel as though the rain was growing more and  more intense with each step you took upwards, hearing as thunder would grow louder and more frequent. The rain would also slick the stone, making it harder and harder for you to climb upwards as your feet twisted whenever they took a step to ensure that you were able to have a little bit of grip against the harsh walkway. Still you persevered, travelling further and further up, past the shifting trees and leaves that surrounded the temple, seeing as the unlit altar at the top came into view, blurred in the mirage of the rain. You grit your teeth and kept walking as the water battered your skin, the wind also beginning to lash harshly across your flesh and bone before you managed to reach the top.

By the time you made it to the top the storm was at its loudest, the sky screaming as you would stare down at the altar, seeing the brown strained inside of the structure was filled to the brim with water, the tainted liquid leaking out from the top. You then moved your eyes over to the stone slab that your children were to be sacrificed on, the rain causing it to be slick as your hands ran over it for a moment before you looked to the sky. “Quetzalcoatl!” You screamed into the air, the thunder clapping back at you in response. “I have come to bargain my life to you! Accept my call, goddess of wind and water, for my cause is just and righteous!” You shouted as you raised your arms above you, closing your eyes as you would hear as the rain and thunder would grow silent.

You opened your eyes to see that the clouds still overhung the sky above you before you realized that the rain wasn’t falling anymore, the droplets having been frozen in mid air, the lightning also seeming to be frozen. You looked around, confused about what was happening before you’d suddenly see a shadow in the clouds, watching as it twisted formlessly for several moments before you started to see it was a silhouette of a snake appearing within them. You’d then watch as the shadows turned to stare at you for a moment, a thick hiss escaping from it as you watched a clawed hand escape from the clouds. It turned itself and grabbed ahold of the cloud, digging its fingers deep before pushing them aside, revealing the visage of the one and only Quetzalcoatl.

The goddess loomed over you in the form of a snake, her face having strangely human eyes despite the fact that the rest of her was that of a beast, the bright blue scales around them only existing to highlight the eyes. The blue scales also pooled around her nose with a bright yellow underside covering her stomach and jaw before your eyes moved to the large feathered mane that started where her body would begin, the feathers being as large as your hand whilst also being a deep, passionate shade of red. Your eyes then moved down the rest of her body, seeing that her green scales became green fur, tuffs of it parting away from her back as you saw the smaller row of red fur keeping her topside and underside away from one another. Finally you looked at the woman’s wings, the large limbs spanning across the entirety of the altar, blue feathers running down the underside whilst red feathers would move across the tips. The snake woman looked down at you, flashing her teeth at you before she would let her tongue slip out from her mouth, flicking into the air.

“Hello there, Mortal.” She said as she slithered down to the ground, sliding across it as a hiss escaped her lips, the woman’s voice being feminine and commanding. “It is rare I make appearances and it’s even rarer I come to negotiate. But your passion… It intrigues me.” She said as she started to curl around you, the woman coming face to face with you before she spoke. “So come on and tell me, mortal. What do you bargain your heart for?”

“My children.” You said, the woman looking slightly shocked before she let out a chuckle to herself.

“One soul for two, mortal? As much as I desire to take your heart, I can not simply exchange things that aren't equal.” She said, her tail moving to your chest and circling around your heart. “But…” She said, letting the words linger as if to provoke you.

“But what, my goddess?” You asked as the woman moved her face  closer to your own, her warm breath pushing against your face.

“But I suppose...other arrangements can be made. You see, you’ve caught me at quite the sensitive time, mortal.” She said as she pulled her body up to show off her dripping wet pussy to you. “I’m in heat and I need to be sated. So, instead of exchanging your life for the lives of your children, why don’t we go about creating a couple more. Is this an acceptable deal, mortal?” She asked, moving her head to the side of your own, her warm breath pushing against the back of your neck.

“I accept your deal, my goddess.” You said, the woman letting out a rather happy sounding hiss to herself before she  moved to face you.

“Excellent. Now, let’s not waste time, shall we?” She asked as she would wrap her body around you, the woman’s long body slowly finding itself underneath your clothes before she would pull against them. A chorus of ripping fabric would echo from the altar as your torn apart clothes fell to the ground, the woman moving her head close to your chest as her slit moved towards your rapidly hardening cock. You’d see as the dripping hole twitched in the air, seemingly incredibly eager to have something inside of it as she would move her forked tongue against your veins, tracing them with her spit. Tension simmered in the air as she let her pussy loom over your member, waiting for a moment before slamming herself down onto your cock, enveloping you with her godly insides.

A groan escaped her mouth as you were shoved inside of her, another laugh-like hiss escaping her lips as she clenched around your member, the fluids dripping down from her pussy and across your waist and thighs. “My, such a big one. Truly I am blessed.” She said with another long hiss before she started to move herself away from your hips, her lower lips curling and rubbing across your member. She reached your tip, keeping it cradled in her snatch as she clenched around your glands, her eyes observing how your face contorted in pleasure as she smiled to herself. She then brought herself down your cock again, a groan escaping from both of you as she would rest at your tip before moving back up again, her long body twitching around your arms and legs.

She continued to move up and down your cock, a mixture of moans and hisses escaping her mouth as you tried to wiggle your arms  out of her grasp, something she noticed immediately as she tightened around them, tying them flat to your body. “Don’t you try and escape this, mortal.” She said as she would swing her head so it was behind your head, her snout moving down to your neck, letting her fangs rest against your flesh. “Or else, you may find yourself… unable to see your children again.” She said, letting her sharp teeth prick against the edges of your veins, hurting just enough that you got the hint about what would happen if she bit down. You’d then feel as she retracted her fangs, instead starting to lap away at your neck with her tongue, slathering it with spit as she moved faster against your hips.

The goddess no longer rested at your tip or base, instead moving across your members in two quick motions up and down, the sound of wet flesh slapping against wet flesh echoing through the frozen raindrops. Her inner walls would also clench much harder around your member, feeling as every inch of her velvety flesh pushed against your member, her lower lips clinging to your member as she dragged herself up it. As she continued to impale herself on your cock you’d feel as her tongue would grow more adventurous, the woman’s tongue moving from your neck and up to your ear. There you could hear her breath between the slapping of her hips, the woman sounding like she had been pent up for years, a mixture of relief and yearning permeating it before she spoke.

“It feels good, doesn’t it? The feeling of my divine pussy wrapped around your mortal cock?” She taunted as she would continue to drift herself across your member, her wings flapping somewhat to add some force to her thrusts. “Even if you did say no, I wouldn't believe you. I can feel your heart beating and it beats to the song of lust!” She shouted as she would wrap even tighter around your body, her scales brushing across some of your body whilst her feathers brushed across the others. “Now, I think it’s time this song reached its crescendo, don’t you think?” She asked, a grin clear on her serpentine face as she would start speeding up even more with you having no choice but to take the lustful wrath of the god,unable to even wrote into a better position due to his tight she held you.

She would start moving so fast that the air was parting across her body, her groans echoing across the air as the pleasure blurred into one powerful sensation that was running across your member. Her inner walls would also lose all illusion of technique, massaging every inch of your cock, pre leaking out of your tip and smearing across her insides which only made her move even faster. “Mmph, that’s it, that’s the spot! I can feel myself burning up even more!” She said, the goddess sounding somewhat mad as her thrust splashed her fluids across your waist, her grip on you became slightly tighter. You’d look at her face to see her eyes were half rolled into the back of her head, her tongue dripping with spit and her breath steaming up the air around her lips, the woman clearly having lost herself somewhat to her lust.

Your attention would soon be taken away from her face as you felt your cock start throbbing inside of her, pushing up against her inner walls which clenched around your member even harder in response. This was also when you felt as a pressure began to build up at the tip of your member, starting off a slight sensation at first before it started to grow more and more intense. The pressure then began to spread across the entirety of your cock, traveling from the tip to the base as the feeling only intensified as time went on, the pre flowing even harder out of the tip of your cock. Eventually the pressure got too much for you, a groan escaping from you before you’d cum inside of her, the woman’s mouth clamping against your neck in response, her fangs being driven into your flesh.

The first ropes burst out of the tip of your cock and pushed deep inside of the goddess pussy with his being barely able to take a breath as you felt a second rope escape your member, her pain of her fangs pushing into your neck being overwhelmed rapidly. More and more cum escaped your cock, moving deep inside of her holy walls and coating them with layer after layer with your jizz. Suddenly the peak of your orgasm arrived, a massive amount of cum escaping your cock and embedding itself into her womb, no doubt impregnating the woman as she moaned into the side of your neck. After that your orgasm came to an end, your ropes suddenly being reduced to mere drops before becoming nothing at all, the woman’s fangs lingering in your neck before she pulled them out.

You then felt as her grip on your body faltered, the woman letting you fall to the ground before she flew into the air, her tongue hanging out of her mouth before she spoke. “Mmph, I must say your member is most impressive for a mortal.” She complimented, a groan escaping your mouth as you rubbed your neck wounds.

“Is my side of the deal complete, Goddess?” You asked, the woman hissing at you happily before she spoke.

“Yes, it is done and I shall wander into the dreams of your priest and tell them off your new sacrifice.” She said, moving her head close to your face, a hunger still in her eyes. “Do not be surprised if you hear from me again, mortal. Tonight was most enlightening, even for a goddess such as me. Farewell!” She said before she drifted off into the clouds, her shadow withering away within them  before the world unfroze around you, the sound of rain and thunder echoing across the air. You laid there for a moment as you wondered if the Goddess would really flow through with her side of the deal as you rubbed the two wounds she had left in your neck, realizing that the goddess had marked you, perhaps to show that you belonged to her and her alone.

You then felt as a sudden tiredness fell over you as you laid yourself upon the stone floor, the tunder and lightning seeming almost pleasant now that all of your worries had been flushed away. You looked into the sky,  feeling as your eyelids grew heavier and heavier as you hoped that the priests wouldn’t mind what you had done, figuring your goddess would have told them to avoid any punishment before you drifted to sleep, your sacrifice having been completed.