Hotel hell(Starling Olive)

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You had been in some rather unnerving situations, being a cop did bring you to places nobody else would ever want to visit after all, but over the past few hours you had found Hotel-09 to be the creepiest place that you had the displeasure of being inside of, the darkness winding around the halls as you clutched your camera in your hands. Hotel-09 was the last of a series of hotels that had been built by Broadside entertainment, the hotel itself never being finished for reasons unknown whilst the other eight seemed to rub without any issue, taking in customers from all over the world. No one had really known what had gone on within the hotel since and the building went undisturbed until you got a call telling you that someone had found themselves trapped inside of the basement of the building and you had been sent to go about rescuing them. Now you were stuck inside of the building, moving across the varying sections of the hotel, getting more and more unnerved as you walked, keeping your camera close in case anything appeared.

You hadn't been able to find the basement yet, every door just leading to unfurnished corridors filled with green barrels as well as several easels that you had found laying around the building, all of which had unpainted canvases laying on them. You also couldn't shake off the feeling that you were being watched by something with it almost feeling like a set of eyes were burning into the back of the head whenever you turned around. Still, you didn’t let it stop you no matter how many barrels that you had accidentally tripped over to get to this point, taking photos to light the path ahead. Now you had decided to see if the way to the basement was in the kitchen, humming as you moved through the halls and into the cafeteria area which you assumed was where people would be having their breakfasts.

The place was dimly lit by long tubular lights, the darkness creeping into the corners and seams of the building, the tables and chairs around you being neatly arranged in rows, a water feature trickling to the side of the room. It was almost pleasant, if somewhat creepy, your eyes glancing around to see a lever in the middle of the room with a vial next to it, your hand wrapping around the lever before you pulled it down, watching as the water moved into the tubing. You'd watch as the water level began to rise, eventually filling the container entirely as you wondered if this would reveal anything about the building. This hope ended when you heard a few footsteps behind you, your eyes widening as you clutched ahold of your camera and turned around to see something shambling out of the darkness.

Your eyes widened as you saw the creature wandered out of the darkness, the being looking like a goose in a chef's outfit,  the feathers being coated in blood with what seemed to be a knife sticking out of the creature wandered towards you. You watched as it wandered closer as you moved your camera up to your face, the creature's limbs moving erratically as if it was being puppeteered by something you couldn't see. You panicked, fiddling around with the buttons before you set off the camera, the flash filling up the entire room and causing the goose to stumble backwards, covering its eyes to shield them from the flash. As the creature gained back its bearings you'd turn  around and ram through the door, hearing as the footsteps started up behind you again.

You sprinted down the hall, hearing as the goose sped after you as you tried to glance for a place to hide, looking behind you to see the feathered monstrosity attempting to capture you to do god knows what to you. As you ran you fumbled with the camera again, the flash hitting the creature again and making it stumble around for a moment before you ran into the next part of the hallway, seeing an opened barrel resting by the wall. Deciding that it was worth a shot you'd jump inside of a barrel, a mixture of footsteps and distorted screaming echoing behind you as you moved inside, hoping that the goose would lose track of you. You heard the sounds of footsteps for several moments, hearing as it wandered around the barrel before the mutilated beast would move away from the barrel and soon out of the room, leaving you in silence.

You sat in the barrel for several moments, feeling as your heart raced in your chest as you eventually calmed yourself down, pulling yourself out of the barrel and hitting the floor with a light thump. You got up, nearly tripping over your own legs as you tried to comprehend what the hell had just chased you through the building, wondering if you could just escape now and say that you didn't sign up to her chased by some horrid monster. You then realised that no one would believe you even if you did show them the pictures you had on your camera, swallowing your nerves as you started to search again. You kept your camera in such a tight grip that it was threatening to break, your heart still beating heavily against your ribcage as you figured that those levers had to lead to something.  

You began searching for the levers, keeping your eyes peeled for anything lurking in the darkness, hearing as the deep moaning sound of the unused pipes echoed through the dark, empty building. When you weren’t controlling the pumps you were running, your fingers resting against the buttons, getting ready to press them the moment the goose came around the corner to do god knows what to you. As you moved through the dark halls you wondered if the hostage was even still alive inside of the basement or if there even was a captive at all, figuring it wouldn't be too out of the realm of possibility given the situation. Suddenly you felt as your vision blurred, the sound of glass smashing filling the air as a section of your vision went black, your eye twitching as something appeared in the dark.

It seemed to be some sort of Otter although all the other details were unclear, the image being blurred as well as being in entirely black and white before suddenly disappearing in a flash of light, your vision unblurring as you looked around to see if anything was coming after you. Nothing appeared as you went to move your hand over to the lever again, wrapping your hand around the device and swinging it down,watching as the water slowly filled up the tank before you’d hear something coming down the hall. It was a whistling sound, the noise echoing through the furnitureless halls as you readied your camera, your fingers hovering over the shutter button before you saw something else come out of the darkness, your eyes widening as a different creature approached you.

It was the Otter from the vision that you had, your eyes glancing up to the woman’s face to see that it was completely eyeless, the empty sockets seemingly only having pure darkness inside of them, the Otters mouth pulled into a sharp toothed grin. Your attention then moved over to her shoulder to see that there was a large metal pipe sticking out of it, seeming to have shoved clean through her flesh and bone although it didn’t seem to impede her in any way as you glanced at the rest of her body. The woman was wearing a striped red and white swimsuit, the outfit tight enough around her body that you could see the slight outline of her nipples poking through the fabric, the suit also highlighting her thighs due to just how tight it was against them. The woman’s hands seemed to be too big for her body as if they had been bloated by something before you looked back at her face again, your fingers moving over to the flash as you noticed the black staining around her eyes as you got ready to run away from the beastly otter.

“The-re you are-re-re…” The otter said, her voice having a deep distortion surrounding it, the voice itself sounding like it was stitched together out of different sentences as the woman suddenly started running towards you. You moved your camera up to your face and snapped a photo, blinding the creature with the flash before you started running, the creature letting out a static noise before starting to give chase. You didn’t look behind you at first, trying to get as far away from the woman as possible as the woman seemed not to let up in her pursuit, her footsteps and screams echoing around you. You also started to hear static fill your eardrums backed by a chorus of metallic slamming, the noise being almost deafening although you couldn’t figure out where it was coming from. 

You don’t know how long you ran before you stopped, panting for breath before turning your head to the door you just ran through, hearing as footsteps got closer and closer to it before the Otter slammed the door open and continued her mad sprint towards you. You started running again, going just fast enough to escape her grasp as she spoke more distorted words, her voice being backed by so much static you couldn't understand what she was saying. You fumbled with your camera again before managing to get a shot off, the light filling the room and repelling the woman before you turned a corner to see a few barrels resting on the wall. Figuring that hiding worked last time, you quickly threw yourself into a barrel, hiding from the woman as she ran into the room, stopping in her tracks as you tried not to make a sound.

The woman then began to pace around the room slowly, her footsteps heavy and deliberate as you soon saw her walk adjacent to the barrel, shifting her head from side to side before she opened her mouth to speak. “Where-are you-u-u-u-u…” She said before her voice dissolved into static screeching, the woman’s head continuing to dart around before she locked her non-existent eyes onto the barrel you were hiding inside off. She would walk over to it slowly, the static coming from her mouth becoming louder and louder as she said a few more things to herself that you couldn’t understand until she was looming over the barrel. You glanced up to see her dark sockets bearing down on you, the thumping of metal in your ears only being beaten by the thumping of your heart.

The woman stared down at you for several moments, her dark eye sockets staring down at you before you’d hear more static escape her mouth before she would turn around and walk away from the barrel, her feet slamming into the ground. The woman’s footsteps would grow more and more distant until you heard a door creak and shut, seemingly leaving the room although you didn’t dare move, your heart still making your ribcage shudder. After a minute or so of silence you assumed that she was gone, letting out a sigh into the air as you felt as though a large weight was lifted from your chest. That was until you heard the sound of footsteps running back towards you with you barely having enough time to react before she would ram her way through the door again.

The woman quickly rammed her hand into the barrel and grabbed ahold of your neck, lifting you up out of the barrel as she screamed in your face, her grip tight around your throat as stared into your eyes. You were then thrown into the wall opposite to you, slamming into it with a heavy thrill as she steadily turned on her heels, the static that was oozing out of her mouth taking an almost laughing quality to it before she spoke. “The-re you are!” She said, her voice drenched in static as she would pounce over to you, one of her hands slamming into the wall as her knees drove themselves so they just over your stomach. From there one of her hands would move down the wall, scratching down the concrete before wrapping  around your neck, choking you slightly.

Her other hand soon mobilised, a set of sharp claws popping out from underneath her fingertips before she slashed at your chest, tearing a series of holes in your shirt before pulling them in either direction and ripping them apart, button flying onto the floor. She then moved her attention to your crotch, grabbing ahold of the trousers and pulling off the entire front end of them in one smooth moment, the woman throwing the fabric so hard that it hit the other wall. Your cock flopped out of your trousers before she would reach over to her own clothes and sink her claws into them, scratching away at them. Within a minute she would turn the garment into shredded fabric, most of it falling into your thighs as you decided to try and get away, attempting to kick the woman as you crawled backward.

She quickly grabbed ahold of your ankle, twisting it just enough so that it would hurt but not break before she dragged you into the middle of the room, letting go of your legs and pouncing onto you a moment later. Her claws dug into your shoulders before she would straddle you, pushing her legs aside with your own as she would let out another series of noises from her mouth, each more distorted then the last. She raised her hips into the air as she would rest her hands down onto your chest , the claws digging down into the flesh as she opened her mouth to speak. “Let’s-have some FUNNNNNNN!” She said, practically screaming the last word at you, her voice elongating into a  horrific screaming noise  before she slammed down onto your cock, consuming it in her warmth.

The woman wasted no time, instantly moving up your cock in a single quick and jittery movement, her hips shaking in the air somewhat before she brought them down again, slamming down into your waist. This was a process she would repeat ruthlessly, the woman being akin to some wild animal in heat, the rate of her thrusts having no consistent tempo or rhythm, instead simply brutally ramming as fast as her limbs allowed. Her inner walls also had no consistency, clenching around your cock at random, the woman’s clenching being so harsh you’d gasp whenever she grasped your member. You attempted to push she away from you, the woman responding by snapping her arms upwards and grabbing ahold of  your wrists, bringing them against the wall. 

Before you got the chance to move again she slammed both of her hands onto your chest, her palms stretching across it before she pushed her claws down into your flesh,a scream escaping your mouth as you felt them cut your skin. She then proceeded to start dragging her hands down your chest with you glancing down to see the marks that were being left in their wake, the cuts themselves being near lines across your skin. You could see the fleshy caverns fill with blood, the liquids spilling out of wounds and slowly tangling within the fur that covered your chest, the woman panting eagerly as she gazed down. She pulled away from your chest and brought her hands to your shoulders again, digging into them as she used her newfound leverage to go thrust even harder.

If there was anyone in the building to listen to you right now, all they would be able to hear would be a mixture of moans, screams and the thumping of flesh against flesh as the woman continued to assault you. Her body was as rigorous as ever although it seems like her insides were getting more and more accustomed to what made you twitch, focusing on those areas as she continued to thrust, fluids splashing across your waist and stomach. “Mmph, this feels-GOOOOOOOOODDDDD!” She groaned out, the woman’s last words distorting into a mess of sound and static. As she did this you’d feel as her hands would move one again, one grabbing ahold of the side of your head and pulling it aside as the other would move to your shoulder. 

Suddenly the woman moved downwards,her chest slamming into your own as her mouth moved into your neck, her teeth digging into your flesh as you groaned into the air again, seeing as the sides of her hips blurred in the air. You’d feel them dig deeply into your neck, her tongue lapping at whatever leaked out of the wounds as she’d furiously blurt out staticky noises from her mouth which did little to deafen the sound of her hips slamming against your own. She eventually pulled away from your neck, blood and spit dripping from her teeth that she licked away, the wound in your neck stinging somewhat. She gazed down at you, seeming somewhat victorious as she sped up even more, your hands reaching up and gripping ahold of her back as you tried to support yourself.

As you’d push your fingers into her back you'd feel a flurry of thrusts hit your hips, your legs twitching somewhat as she moved her tongue to the bite marks on your neck and began to lick away at them. You glanced over to the pipe sticking out of her shoulder and tried to reach for it, hoping that it would be something that could actually damage the woman, your hand grasping at it before you’d felt her hand wrap around your wrist, pulling her head up as she did so. You then felt as she slammed your hand back into the wall, another growl exposing her mouth before she let her jaw hang open somewhat, showing off her bloodstained teeth. “Don’t move-e-e!” She said, the voice sounding shockingly clear for once before it was overtaken by static again, her tongue lashing against her teeth.

That was when you felt your cock start to throb inside of her pussy, pushing against her ruthless inner walls as she groaned into the air, the static traveling right into yours as the metallic slamming sound appeared in your ears again. A pressure also appeared right at the edge of your member as you got closer and closer to cumming inside of her, feeling as all the cum balled at your tip as you pushed your teeth together, grinding them through your moans. You’d feel as it would get more and more intense, your orgasm approaching you like a train without breaks that you knew you had no way of stopping. Eventually your orgasm hit,  a groan escaping through your clenched teeth as she pushed against your hips, pinning you between her and the wall.

You’d feel as rope after rope started to spray inside of her, the woman’s back shaking somewhat as she would feel your cum push deep inside of her, staining her walls with a fine layer of pearly white liquid. You’d feel as your orgasm went on and on, a series of growls and horrid static noises echoed through her windpipe with you also being able to feel as each load grew larger and faster than the last. After several pleasure filled moments your orgasm would reach its peak, a massive amount of cum escaping your member and pushing deep inside of her, no doubt entering her womb if she had one. After that your orgasm came to an end, the last few drops scraping against her inner walls as she panted over you, her empty eyesockets bearing down on your face.

She got up onto her feet, a wet sound escaping her pussy as your cock fell out of her pussy, cum dripping out of the hole and down her thighs as she looked down at you, seemingly unable to figure out what she was going to do next. She lifted her hand into the air, getting ready to solve you to bits before something slammed into the ground somewhere else in the hotel, her head twisting to the source of the noise before she ran away, leaving you laying on the ground. You stayed there for a moment, waiting for her to come back and kill you before you realized that she wasn’t coming back, getting up off the ground as you wiped over the leftover spit and blood from your fur. You stood there for a moment before you decided to take the brief mercy that you had even given and ran in the other direction, hoping that you’d find a change of clothes in this labyrinth of a hotel.